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Andy Smith's avatar

What a surprising and arresting meditation!

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

Thank you, Andy. I appreciate you.

Rebecca Cook's avatar

Oh my goodness! Those last few lines. How extraordinary. I may have to steal of that eggy goodness!

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

I’m as humbled as ever, dear Rebecca. I would love to read what it’s inspired. I look forward to it.

Eileen Susan_Dust the Diamonds's avatar

Ouch. 💛

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

I love that response!

Fotini Masika's avatar

Oh my...

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

Ah, Fotini, I knew you would absorb this.

School of Blue's avatar

Great piece, Mahdi.

Mahdi Meshkatee's avatar

Thank you for reading, Richard.

Rebecca Cook's avatar

Stopped by, re read this poem. I love this poem. So much.